A 365 Daily Challenge: Day 69


Day 69
05.05.2014
Topic: Dancing uphill
Topic given by Siw Cathrine Chrstiansen

Foxtrot movement
Watcher of the skies
Looking down at you
As you take the first insecure steps
Trained
Towards the top

Climbing the hillside like weights were lifted of your shoulder
Using double steps
Accompanied by fly me to the moon

First troubled steps arrive
Halfway
When your quick steps
Fail to recognize
Limbo

Going back to the original
Step by step
Crawling
Life depending on your next move

Victory
At the top
No structure
No synchronization
Just pure
Relief

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One Response to A 365 Daily Challenge: Day 69

  1. Kip says:

    Very nicely done! I would have turned a line or two into a simile, but that’s just me.

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