A 365 Daily Challenge – Day 59


Day 59
25.04.2014
Topic: The Ocean
Topic given by Tove Tønnesen

Deep green
Blending with the emerald blue
Collisions of a deadly force on the surface
Hiding the secrets underneath
While the waves speak
The bottom of the ocean sleeps
Hibernating in pitch black
No sound
Stream of fresh water, so slow
It is not even recognized

Our guardian
The preserver of our history
On top of our bone structure
it lies there
kissing the very first steps we took
where everything we can see
begins
we can only see the end
the waves
the mountains
the trees

But we have to seek underneath the surface
to truly understand where we come from
and wisdom is built
the moment we understand that some things
can not be reached

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7 Responses to A 365 Daily Challenge – Day 59

  1. sleepykitten says:

    oOoOoOoo…I especially love these two lines:

    “Deep green
    Blending with the emerald blue…”

  2. Love the last lines and every word in our journey as a seeker:)

  3. Anjali says:

    Really liked this! Thanks for dropping by at my blog LIFESCAPES!

  4. sandradan1 says:

    As you’re a poet, you might also like my writing blog. 🙂 SD
    http://www.sandradanby.com/

  5. love this! I agree with sleepykitten :“Deep green
    Blending with the emerald blue…” those are amazing lines.. 😀

  6. I liked the line “kissing the first steps we took” and for me the whole poem suggested the relentless movement of the ocean like time never to return in exactly the same form again

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