A 365 Daily Challenge: Day 11


Day 11
08.03.2014
Topic: Femme fatale

Seductive eyes
Locked in to create the illusion
That you are the center of attention
You are kept in the gridlock
As she approach you with a lust
That removes all your masculinity
Of the two of you
You are the only one truly naked
Stripped of your sovereignty
And your credentials

She is in total control

She is strong
Every weakness you might posess
She now holds in her palms

The only solution 
Would be escape

But you refuse to release yourself
From the palm of seduction

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9 Responses to A 365 Daily Challenge: Day 11

  1. Tish Farrell says:

    Thanks for the follow. There’s such creativity here. Write on!

  2. kennymack2 says:

    Nice! Very nice. But I can tell you’re an escape artist
    (Smile)

  3. Thank you kindly for the follow! Intriguing prose. I look forward to reading more!

  4. J M Naszady says:

    Excellent poem. Thank you for following my blog!

  5. xoxosanaz90210 says:

    Interesting poem. I noticed a typo (in this case not too sure if it was deliberate), here goes: “as she approaches […] that removes”.

  6. kennymack2 says:

    Good ‘ketch’ by xoxo. . . today. I have never read a book in the last twenty years where there was not a couple of typos. It has become one of my favourite pastimes. And it happens on TV a lot. Just this morning the last ‘e’ in there was left out, on one of the news program’s,emphasis banners. and orally, if you pay attention every five minutes your mind fills in for the misspoken word.

  7. Hardethaewoh says:

    Great work!… brief, crisp, short but meaningful and impactful…

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